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Swamped in the dreams that clog my reality
With only the desk lamp to remind me
That visions are only illusions in the chilly night
That batters my skin with pricks and drafts.
I still drift off though, to that place in the corner of my mind
Where dust is slowly being cleared away,
But the spiders still crouch unseen, waiting for me to forget.
I dont know in which direction to turn. I'm waiting here
Alone, for someone to pull me along, to clear my eyes, dry my tears.
I think I know but then I'm confused.
I yearn to be set free from this lonliness that plagues
My senses. It seems like I've just emerged from the waters,
Calm and shy, to a new strange world. I feel the
Sweet caress of the sun, but it's not really there.
On the soft breeze, I hear a thousand voices, beckoning.
The laws of the universe stop here. For when you
Come to a place like this you know your entire world
Is about to shatter.
©2006-2010 ~ScooterB-man
:iconscooterb-man:

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Something I havent even pre written, totally spur of the moment, some things swimming in my head again. This probably wont be done or as done as I'd like it to be, *duh Jess, that's why you put it in scraps!* but I dont feel like it, I think it deserves a little more recognition than that so yeah, have a ball.

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:iconenematexo:
"I think I know but then I'm confused."
That's the line I most relate to when reading this.
Very good, though. If only I could understand it!

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Keine liebe für dich, mein schatz!
:iconscooterb-man:
I'm not really expecting many people to understand this, these are the complex things that float in my brain that I dont tell anyone about so dont worry about it, but I do apologize for not makeing it all that clear. :)

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Ah screws, they fix my world :love:
:iconcorporalclown:
:hug: Jess if ya ever need a person to talk to or a shoulder to cry on I am and always will be there for :glomp:

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I would rather sit in a field of meadows.
:iconscooterb-man:
Thanks but not this time I dont think. Its too complicated.

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Ah screws, they fix my world :love:
:iconblue-hawk-dreaming:
I like this one. The imagery is astounding. Hah! She said "astounding!":ahoy:

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"And the iron boats go, as the mariners all know,
with the Gales of November remembered."
:iconscooterb-man:
kool thanks. :) I aim to please.

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Ah screws, they fix my world :love:
:iconblue-hawk-dreaming:
:smooch:

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"And the iron boats go, as the mariners all know,
with the Gales of November remembered."
:iconchaotic-canine:
Beautifully written! ^..^

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Be careful whose toes you step on today because they might be connected to the foot that kicks your ass tomorrow.

All it takes is one bad day to reduce the sanest man alive to lunacy. That's how far the world is from where I am. Just one bad day!!
:iconscooterb-man:
Thank you so much! The :+fav: ismuch appreciated! :hug:

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Ah screws, they fix my world :love:

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